STORY 099 / Office Commute Chronicles
The Quiet Journey
For once, nothing happened on Rhea’s way home. She needed a moment to process this outrageous development.
HSR Layout · 4-minute read · Fiction
Rhea left work expecting her usual journey home and the small collection of stories it might provide. Her flatmate, Disha, normally received a voice note after Rhea parked: a report on a confusing junction, an unexpected delay or a man who had expressed an entire personality through his horn.
This evening, Rhea put her phone away before driving and joined the road calmly. She had no urgent appointment. Dinner could wait. The plan was simply to reach home safely, a goal sensible enough to risk sounding unambitious.
The first stretch was manageable.
So was the next.
At a junction, she stopped appropriately, waited and continued when it was safe. Another driver gave her room without turning the interaction into a negotiation. Rhea acknowledged the courtesy and kept her attention where it belonged.
Nothing developed into a story.
This was unfamiliar territory. She did not check her phone to share the surprise, and she did not speed up because the route felt easier than expected. An easy journey still required ordinary care. She followed the road, maintained sensible space and resisted the human temptation to reward good progress with a bad decision.
By the time she reached HSR Layout, she realised she would be home earlier than usual. The thought was pleasant, then oddly suspicious. Had she forgotten an errand? No. Was there a meeting she was meant to attend? Not tonight. Her day had simply released her without a final complication.
She entered the apartment parking area, parked correctly and switched off the engine. Only then did she pick up her phone.
Disha had sent a message asking when she would be home.
Rhea replied: Here.
The answer arrived immediately. What happened?
Rhea stared at the screen. This was precisely the problem. Nothing had happened, and the household communication system did not have a convenient category for it.
She recorded a short voice note while safely parked. “Normal roads. Reasonable journey. Arrived.”
She listened to it once. It sounded like a message recorded by someone who had stolen her calendar.
Disha called.
“Are you all right?”
“Yes.”
“You sound confused.”
“I had a nice drive.”
There was a pause. Disha was kind enough not to make her repeat something difficult.
“Come upstairs,” she said. “We’ll talk about it.”
Rhea got out, checked the car was secure and walked inside. In the lift, she found herself rehearsing details that were not remotely dramatic. A driver had waited. She had waited. Nobody had tried to turn several seconds into a contest. It was the sort of journey she wanted more often, yet she seemed determined to apologise for its lack of narrative structure.
Disha was preparing dinner. She looked at the clock, then at Rhea, then at the clock again.
“You can chop vegetables.”
Rhea laughed. “So there is a consequence.”
Over dinner, they talked about things other than travel. Disha described a book she was reading. Rhea remembered a funny conversation from work that would normally have been buried beneath the evening road report. They ate slowly, washed the dishes and still had time left over.
Later, Rhea considered posting about her uneventful journey. She decided the evening did not require a public announcement to count as good. She could simply enjoy having arrived with some energy intact.
Before bed, Disha asked whether tomorrow's report would be more exciting.
“I hope not,” Rhea said.
She set out her things for the morning and put the phone down. There had been no grand lesson, no remarkable rescue and no junction-based plot twist. The city had given her an ordinary, careful journey home.
For once, the missing story was the best part of the story.
Read when you’re a passenger or safely off the road. Never while driving.
