STORY 033 / Office Commute Chronicles
The Missing Passenger
Deepak could see his shuttle. His shuttle could see him. The divider had declined the invitation.
Marathahalli · 4-minute read · Fiction
Deepak reached his office shuttle stop three minutes early and congratulated himself before checking which side of the road he occupied. This order of operations would become the morning’s central problem.
His usual pickup point near Marathahalli had been adjusted slightly. The transport email included a map, a gate reference, and a sentence beginning PLEASE NOTE. Deepak had read the first two words and assumed that intention counted as comprehension.
Across the divider, the shuttle arrived at the correct designated stopping area. Its driver, Basavaraj, checked the passenger list. Deepak waved enthusiastically from the opposite pavement.
Basavaraj saw him. So did nine colleagues.
Deepak pointed at the bus. Basavaraj pointed towards the proper pedestrian crossing farther along. Deepak pointed at his watch. Basavaraj pointed towards the crossing again. The driver’s directions remained remarkably consistent under pressure.
Inside the bus, Deepak’s teammate Latha called him.
“Other side,” she said.
“I noticed.”
“Use the crossing.”
“I know.”
“Then why are you still waving?”
Deepak lowered his hand.
For a brief, unhelpful second, he considered whether the divider had an opening nearby. There was no safe shortcut. Traffic was moving. He stayed on the pavement, told Latha he would walk to the crossing, and asked whether the shuttle could wait within its allowed pickup window.
Basavaraj confirmed through Latha that he could wait a short while in the designated area. If Deepak needed longer, transport support would arrange another safe option. No one suggested turning the bus around dramatically or creating a new stop in a traffic lane.
Deepak began walking briskly along the footpath. He was carrying a laptop bag, a lunchbox, and the knowledge that his entire team could probably watch his mistake develop in real time.
Latha sent a message: WALK NORMALLY. WE ARE NOT FILMING A CLIMAX.
He slowed to a sensible pace.
At the crossing, he waited until it was safe and crossed properly. A woman beside him asked whether he was the person waving at the shuttle. He admitted it. She nodded with the understanding of somebody who had once misread a train platform announcement and still remembered it.
By the time he reached the bus, Basavaraj had completed the passenger count and allowed another employee to board. Deepak climbed in, thanked him, and apologised for the delay. The driver nodded without delivering a lecture. This made the apology feel more important, not less.
The passengers offered a restrained round of applause. Deepak asked whether this was necessary. Latha said the team believed in recognising completed journeys.
He sat down and opened the transport email. The map was clear. The gate reference was clear. The PLEASE NOTE sentence, now read in full, explained exactly what he had done wrong. He forwarded it to a colleague who joined the route the following day, adding a helpful message rather than assuming everyone else would make his discovery independently.
Latha offered him a biscuit from her bag. He asked whether this was sympathy. She said it was breakfast insurance, because somebody who had missed the PLEASE NOTE sentence might also have overlooked the need to eat. He accepted without challenging the assessment. Very sensibly.
At the office, his manager asked whether the morning pickup arrangement was working.
“Very well,” Deepak said. “I have tested the pedestrian connection.”
Latha laughed into her coffee.
The next morning, Deepak arrived at the correct spot five minutes early. He checked the road, the gate, and the map. Then he put his phone away and waited.
When the shuttle pulled in, Basavaraj opened the door with a small smile.
“Same side today.”
Deepak nodded. “I’ve upgraded.”
Read when you’re a passenger or safely off the road. Never while driving.
